Today we edited the rest of the sequence, the shots from my bedroom actually work really well with the voiceover. The shot of me writing in the diary is matched with the shot of the two actors writing in the wedding register, it matches up a lot better than i expected.
We decided to re write the end of the script to help the audience understand what is happening better and also to add to the enigma;
"karma comes back around (a knock on the door) and i can't hide any longer..."
this makes it seem like she's being chased and the knock on the door makes the audience wonder who is behind it, they want to continue watching to find out.
The only thing i'm unhappy with is the end shot, we should have filmed more shots but we didn't have time, we ended up having to blur it out into a blackout which isn't how i expected it to end.
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